State of the Project: Chapter two script completed.

•October 14, 2014 • 2 Comments

Took a while because one midpoint segment needed a lot of work, and I created writers block (I don’t believe in having it, or suffering from it. You do it to yourself).

But I am happy to say that after that slump, the rest of it moved along pretty well.

 

Now I am sitting down, re-plotting the rest of the chapters and adjusting temporal lines and new character introductions..

I do have a few more concept art, and sketches, that I should share.
But for the time being I am pondering whether to move this project to a different blog.
What do you think?

 

Women’s fashion in comics….it shouldn’t matter.

•October 8, 2014 • 2 Comments

Holyjumpigmackrelandabucketofsandypearls!!!
What is wrong with people? (Don’t answer. I know already… A LOT!!)

Would you give a book full of incest, infanticide, murder, wars to a kid to read?

No?
Well, how come so many kids are being sent to bible camp, here in the South of the US? Because in case you haven’t noticed, the judo-christian bible is full of those examples.

Would you give a comic full of sex, gore and violence to a kid to read?

No? Exactly! That’s why “The Crossed” is not for kids.

Then… why all these idiotic protests about WonderWoman looks like this, and Starfire looks like that?

PARENTS and adults in general, are responsible for what their kids read. Periods. And kids are supposed to sneak away and try to read things that are inappropriate for them.

We (in the United States of America) live in a somewhat free society (or one that keep telling itself it is) and as such, there is going to be a great variety of books and comics being published, because they respond to market demands.

Some will depict characters in a PG way, some wont, and either will go for blatantly sexualized version, or will stay with the cheesecake version.

I read one, or the other, and then move on, depending whether they addressed my taste. If they haven’t I drop them and it takes a miracle or a the passage of a very long amount of time, for me to pick them up again. If I get my expectations met, I keep buying them.

But then I read this:

http://www.themarysue.com/red-hood-and-the-outlaws-starfire/

And my question remains: WHY?

Why should we make it a subject of public debate?

Is it because there are no comic book alternatives? Isn’t there a plethora of “Safe” starfire comics Lucy couldn’t have picked up from the .25 Cent bin at the local comic book shop?

Isn’t there a bunch of Saturday morning cartoons she can watch with safe Teen Titans?

Lucy is in college, and she doesn’t understand the cultural complexities of alien life forms? Or market sales in comics? Man.. we are screwed with idiots like these in college!

Or you may argue something to the effect that these materials desensitize the male population concerning abuse towards women.
To which  I counter-argue that without examples like these we couldn’t illustrate counterpoints of a conversation.
At the end of the day, the problem is not that we have porn, or cheesecake, or burlesque, or gore, or violence, or gunplay in comics. What is really the problem is that some people decide to do wrong.

Some people decide to murder, abuse, rape, harass, humiliate, and basically do evil.

You may argue that some people don’t know better, others may argue they need to be taught, others may argue that behavior is learned and as a society we are responsible for each other….
And then they seem to forget that for a society to be free and open, there have to be counterpoints, and counter-culture movements.

Another article of people just focusing on their agenda.

http://comicsalliance.com/wonder-woman-marguerite-sauvage-sensation-comics-fashion/

Man, is this script cliched, or what!

Either Sean E. Williams got hired to write a pamphlet on sexual harassment  and I didn’t know about it, or he decided to talk down to its audience to a degree where I can’t find my brain anymore?
Mind you, I am not against pamphlets nor pro sexual harassment. I am against cliched writing in shape manner or form.

Let me see if I understood the critical points of the plot correctly: A dude who knows and admires  WonderWoman, thinks he can manhandle her??? And he pulls out a shotgun in the middle of the street??

I repeat, sell me this as “Wonderwoman against harassment” and I will make a post about how proactive DC is cleaning their image.

Make me pay for this, expecting original adventures…I get pissed because I wasted 10 minutes of my life reading about something I already know and conveyed to me in an unoriginal manner.

And do not have the audacity to state “Fashion matters”

Yes. Fashion Matters. Very Little. In the whole scheme of things.

When there are millions of unsolved cases of missing children in the US alone… fashion matters.

When troop are still being deployed in foreign countries to fight for the corporate interests of a few multinational companies… fashion matters.

When our education levels are deplorable, and we consistently keep coming at the bottom of the charts of charts comparing industrialized countries… fashion matters.

When our police forces seem to live in a state of constant militarization, and there is no oversight over the police who shot people on sight… fashion matters.

When our political classes are in bed with the oligarchs and together they are destroying the middle class, and creating a large segment of underemployed populations…… fashion matters

When the only debt you can’t get rid off via bankruptcy is the one imposed in our student class via student loans and young adults are leaving colleges with several thousands of dollars in debt…… fashion matters

 

So, no. Excuse me if I don’t care if Starfire is a detached sexual being, or if Wonderwoman shows her ass too much through her shorts.

And I am tired of this fallacy that SOME women keep purporting when they repeat like parrots: “I dress this way to feel good about myself, not for you.”

Let’s deconstruct this with logic.
Granted, you may not be dressing for me, specifically,( nor anyone should expect you too). So far, we agree.

But then you derive pleasure or “feel good” feeling from “dressing this way”. Dressing has a functional side to it, protect us from elements, and maintain a constant core temperature for our bodies.
But if you make fashion statement and are not dressing just for functional purposes. You are not the proverbial arbol that falls in the forest where no one can hear it. You dress comforming to norms and expectations in your society and societal circles. You expect to create a reaction, you expect to build a perception and construct an identity based on how the other members of society perceive you.
SO FUCK YOU, YOU ARE DRESSING FOR US. For ALL of us, but you are.
And by the way, so am I and so is everyone else who doesn’t live in a cabin in the woods 100 miles away from civilization.

So lets agree that you are not dressing to attract MY particular attention, but also lets agree that societal interaction is a two way street. You try to influence society with your tools and society will try to influence your behavior with theirs.

So please, WOMEN OF THE WORLD, stop repeating “I don’t dress for you!” because in a way you do.  Find something else and more original to say.

But even if you do, its ok. Because I won’t fucking care.

Because fashion doesn’t matter, when there are a gazillion causes to address and a bigillion of issues to fix in this planet earth.

 

 

Captain America: The Winter Soldier … The best super-hero movie I’ve seen in years….

•September 25, 2014 • 2 Comments

Technical Info: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1843866/

Being often on a shoe-string budget, I had to skip the big screen release of this movie. Then again, there were other movies released in the previous and later months and I had to skip those too.

So, I ended up waiting for the DVD release.
First time in many many years where I regreted doing so.

A lot of hipsters can be found around the blogospheres and other internet outlets praising movies with a statement akin to :”Not only it was a great superhero movie, but it also was a great movie.”

Well, in this case, this was a great Super-Hero movie, and it also happen to be a decent movie too.

But it is pretty difficult to make a GREAT super-hero movie. Granted, it has been getting easier on the last decade or so, but still….

Here are some factors you have to contend with:

1) Pulp feel, not translating well to screen: There are millions of directors out there, all waiting for a chance to lend their vision to a project and get financed to put their ideas onto the screen. It is incredibly difficult to find a good director, who would do justice to the material, and, if needed, leave their ego at the door, and focus on what is best for the character. In Captain America: The Winter Soldier this was achieved with flying colors.

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State of a project: Main Character coming to life (Part 2)

•September 18, 2014 • Leave a Comment

From the previous post (http://comicwatcher.wordpress.com/2014/09/09/state-of-a-project-main-character-coming-to-life-part-1/)

The main character is getting fleshed out. But there are a few plot devices I have to take into consideration. For example, since the totality of the story spans an arch of a decade, I have to evolve the character and age him.

I also have to account for the wounds and injuries he is going to incur in the course of his career, and also give some as a back story, and part of his upbringing.

 

M.Sketch8 The appearance of the hero is becoming more consistent and solid.

The base is a muscular but thin frame, he is not so much bulky as solid steely muscle.

He is asked to make appearances in the gray suit that is so emblematic of the character he is playing, but as soon as he is left to his devices, he switches to Tshirt and Jeans.

The mask is also cute, but not necessary. He puts it on mainly for work. This is a homage to Will Eisner and his crime fighting creation, where the man behind the mask was just circumstantial to the wonderful stories that were being told, stories about people, circumstances, a city and its dwellers, life in full bloom and decadence….

Also, I want to highlight this concept of a man who is expected to interpret a hero characters, but he hates it.

It is the story of a man who is working as a comic book character, and the things he encounters.

 

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State of a project: Main Character coming to life (part 1)

•September 9, 2014 • Leave a Comment

Like most writers, I hit a block on a plot twist in the middle of chapter 2.
Oh well. Lets switch gears, I say, and spend some time on the draftboard.

My protagonist has to be physically attractive, because I am using conventions found in pulp and action comics.

I am intermingling this setting with grittiness and realism, so I gave him a couple of traits that make him not as attractive, such as a hooked nose and lots of small scars everywhere. And body-hair. Take that hairless perfectly sculpted superheroes.

Now in all honesty, this is a character that was already born more than 15 years ago. Even back then I already had some character designs for him.

For example, this character design was done in the mid 90’s.

The Pony-tail is a dead giva-way.

This character is interpreting/impersonating a comic book hero. I paid homage to Will Eisner’s The Spirit and fashioned him simple, with the domino mask and usually with a suite and tie.  And getting his clothes torned off quite a bit.

I made many drafts and images of the character

And made a lot of concept art for him.

Now, almost 20 years later, the story holds, but the character goes over some slight changes.

 

Next phase on fleshing him out, now that I have a starting point, is an exercise in realism. I place him in the world I have concocted, and give him a background story, how he grew up, what has he seen and what has molded him.

He was orphaned very early. Not for dramatic effect of vengeance, ala Bruce Wayne, but because in his dystopian future, his parents couldn’t survive. Period.

So he grows up in orphanages. Thus he is street savvy, a bit cynical. But somewhere in his genetic makeup there exists a desire to do good. He doesn’t give it up completely…he just buries deep within his soul, because the world he has to live in is not kind to heroes or those of altruistic nature.

He grows up disenchanted, but with the buried sense that something has to change in his world. He joins a company that is experimenting with a marketing/pr stunt, where they genetically alter a bunch of volunteers in order to make them viable “superhero” characters.

My character is one of the 10% who survive the program and is supposed to make staged appearances as PR stunts for his company, as a masked comic book hero of yesteryear.

Since he is taking on the role of a popular superhero, so he is a man in character.  But he is also very cynic and jaded, so he will take to wearing the domino mask with a grain of salt. Way too often he will just pull it over his head, like a guy rising his eyeglasses.

After his gene therapy didn’t kill him and made him stronger, his metabolism is accelerated so he loves wearing those T-shirts called wife-beaters. His physique is athletic, but the wife-beater gives him a certain sleazy look. A little secret he will keep to himself is that he knows that accelerated metabolism will likely mean accelerated natural death, and he knows his life will be cut short. So, he is inclined to bouts of melancholy.

His company wants him to look heroic, but he will often end up beaten, bloodied, bruised, and with his clothes torn. His company also wants him clean shaven, and hairless, like a cartoon comic book character, those bodybuilder -types of man-child that don’t even show hair in their legs. But he will skip the waxing often. More so after certain event grants him leverage to act more freely than before.

So, I spent a few days (evening hours) honing down the face.

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You can see the general gest. Hair slicked back naturally. A color that is not blond, but more like light brown. (Color not relevant, because the initial concept is black/white/halftones.)

I wanted him to look young, but then the concept of accelerated metabolism lined up with the idea of an older soul in a young body, so event though he is in his mid twenties, he may look a bit older, curt, jaded.

 

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A comment on celebrity nude pictures and such

•September 5, 2014 • Leave a Comment

(Man, with that title, I wouldn’t be surprised if my blog generates a lot of “the wrong” type of traffic)

So, a couple of days ago, the web broke out with the news that a bunch of celebrities had their pictures hacked from devices and cloud storage and posted online

http://money.cnn.com/2014/09/01/technology/celebrity-nude-photos/index.html

And, because my day to day job deals with security and technology, here I am trying to read the sources employed, the methodology, and how it happened, and all the posts, blurbs, snippets keep hammering on the horror of having your nude pictures stolen.

Let me bring up some points:

1) The internet is the wild wild west:

And that is how it is supposed to be. The internet is a series of protocols put together to ensure the perdurance of electronic communications and redundancy. It failed, because it is easy to break and terminate redundancy.

The internet is not for pussies, and is not for the timid. The internet is a meritocracy, where the more you know the better you are. The internet is not designed to keep you honest, nor to make you wiser, nor to make you happy.

If we (as a society) want that, then we have to invent something from scratch, like Internet 2.0, where identity is associated with registration, and there are some devices regulating traffic flow, etc….

But the existing internet is not for people to be safe. It is not for people to be secured. It is done solely with the purpose of transmitting. Transmitting whitepapers, documents, pictures and videos of cats, people humping sheep, human decapitations, copyrighted materials, manifests, pamphlets, and above all porn porn and more porn.

You are in charge, of learning your device and getting on the internet and being safe. There are some people out there who want to get into the internet and hack you or your device, and they live for it, either for profit of for thrills.

Any type of regulation is idiotic, and I am including anything such as the DCMA to whatever you want to include.

The internet (as it was designed) was not to be regulated.

2)   So… you got your naked pictures stolen… WTFC (WhoTheFuckCares)!

Seriously. You have a right to your privacy, and to your personal space and all of that. But from the moment that you take a recorded imprint of your persona, you are risking it being mismanaged and ending up in the wrong hands. It shouldn’t be like that, but then again, there shouldn’t be wars nor poverty, and they do exist, and those are issues much bigger and important than your naked ass.

True Story: Marilyn Monroe took some explicit pictures with a photographer when she was very young, to pay rent. Years later, she became a big star and the photos surface, and she went full truth with them: “I needed the money, and they were done in good taste. I have nothing to be ashamed of”.

But for crap’s sake! Throw a rock at the internet pond, and you will hit a stolen sex celeb tape, or stolen cell phone pics, or other stuff like that.

When you are in the public eye, people want to see your ass. I  am not talking from personal experience here, of course. Part of my everyday job is actually very involved in personal and cyber security, and I am exposed to so much human stupidity when it comes to social media that I am truly dumbfounded and end up questioning whether humanity, as a species has any right to exist at all.

Now, combine that degree of stupidity with strange expectation that equates nakedness with dirtiness, shamefulness, or nastiness. Improper behavior in general. Then you get people feeling that taking a naked selfie is something naughty… and having them stolen and seen is something shameful….

I am here to tell you, NO ONE SHOULD FREAKING CARE. And I am telling it to you from both angles. You shouldn’t care if any one sees you naked, and no one should care to see you naked.

This fallacy of us being prude about our bare image extends to so many aspects that it is hard to compile them in a single post.

But since you are reading, I will try, and so you won’t assume that I am writing them in any sort of order, I’ll use bullet points:

  • You are born naked, there is nothing wrong being naked. Period. I have nothing to add to this.
  • Some people are going to leer at you for being naked. Sure, and other will leer at your hair, other at your earlobes, other yet at your shoes. Get over it.
  • People are going to form a bad opinion about you based on your body image. Yes. Well. Screw them. Unless you made the conscious decision of paying your rent by showing off your body, then you shouldn’t care. You should never give a flying turd what others think of you. If you do, you are just being manipulated. Find a way of grow out of that.
  • The veil of turpitude that surrounds nakedness, and its usual association with sex, just promotes and reinforces the concept of keeping sex and nakedness secret and relegated to “naughty situations.” You are just feeding into ignorance, and letting the ignoramus win.
  • When you die, at one point you will be naked and in communion with the earth. Bringing the full circle to a close.

This is not to say you should go out running naked every Thursday night.  Depending on your geographical situation it could result in  a sunburn or frostbite. And the fact  that society seems to love hanging on to their old mores.

But I do advocate that you start putting your two cents into every conversation you have on the street or at work, or in family circles stating: If we were more exposed to this stuff we wouldn’t go around making it a scandal. THAT IS THE REAL SCANDAL!

Sex and nakedness is not something you abhorrent, nor despicable. But alas if we think of it as such, there is something wrong with us. I view it as clipping my toenails. Nothing horrendous, but I shouldn’t do it in public for health reasons, and I should try to do it without bothering anyone. Much like religious belief systems.

So no, I wont be looking at, searching for, seeking out the pictures of those celebs naked. Why? Same asnwer I give when they ask me: “Have you seen the Kardashians (insert name of any celebrity here)?”
No. Why? Are they looking for me? No? Then why should I give a rat’s ass.?

 

Here is my favorite pic to go with this rant.

 

 

 

DON’T Become a bad Fiction-Writer (Comic Books)

•August 21, 2014 • 1 Comment

Since I started this blog I wrote a few articles about WHAT NOT to do and WHAT TO emulate when you are writing a comic (or a work of fiction in general).

If you don’t believe me check out Nuff Said Posting

I don’t think (and this is my personal opinion) that good fiction-writing is about being 100% original and giving echo to your own inner voice. Nor it means being popular and selling a gazzillion issues. Nor it means selling little but having awesome critics review your work with lots of kudos!

Of course you can define it in any of those terms, if you want. If you want to sell a lot, then you want to hone on you targeted audience. If you want to receive amazing reviews, learn to write like a pro, and don’t focus on sales.  If you want to hone on your inner voice, and be unique, be ready to not sell, to not get good reviews, and keep knocking on doors.

Yep, this is how all writers live and work…suuuure…

The most difficult trick anyone can performs is: Writing with their unique voice, selling a lot, and being popular. It is possible.

Let’s break it down into rules:

RULE #1   Watch TV Shows, not to be entertained, but to analyze their MANY failures in storytelling.

TV is a medium to be mass consumed. And the majority of TV shows are shit on a stick. This post is not about what are good show and which ones are bad.  If you want to learn about some good ones from the last 10 years, all I can recommend are Lost (innovative storytelling), 24 (some seasons, for its pacing and consistency), Shameless (learn how to write believable and likable real characters with distinct voices), Once Upon A Time (to learn how to adapt old tales with new twists), BattleStar Galactica (how to write believable dramatic Science Fiction).

But then you have the immense majority of shows. For example, SuperNatural in Season 1. You got a theme of demon hunters and supernatural happenstances heavily overshadowed by cheap and overused soap-opera topics.

Mind you, most shows during their first season suck. Usually because they don’t know what they want to be yet.

TV Shows are done (in their majority) to achieve massive audiences, and thus earn profits through advertisement. The business model is changing, and some Netflix and Hulu only produced shows are really amazing. But a TV show gets done by a writer bringing an idea to a producer, or sometimes a producer having an idea, and asking a writer to put it on paper.

Then 10,000 people have their input and re-write the concept until it (usually) is unrecognizable from the first concept.

RULE #2 Read everything and anything (and not just comics)

Do a quick experiment. How many of these terms you can talk about in certain depth?

  • Operation Paperclip
  • The children’s crusade
  • The beast of Gevaudan
  • Piri Reis Map
  • Los Tayos Cave
  • Lake Volstok Anomaly.

Seriously, if you consider yourself a good fiction-writer, you should know the story behind them like the back of your hand, because the ones I chose there are not that weird, obscure or unknown. And why is it you don’t know about them?  Because you haven’t read enough.
And the problem with that is that there is nothing new under the sun. And that wonderful story of vampires you thought about when you were 14… it turns out a famous writer wrote about it and better back in 1975. Or that mystery story you had in mind… someone wrote about it back in the 19th century.

After you have read a lot, you will understand better controversial issues, you will understand a bit more of history, and be able to voice characters better.

RULE #3 Things to Avoid after you master RULE #1: CLICHES

“Trust Me!!” You want your characters to resolve a confrontation quickly, because they already spent two pages arguing? Use the magic of “Trust me” or any of its variants “I need you to trust me on this!” or “You have to trust me!”   This is lazy, and is such a common device used in TV, that people even think is OK to use it in real live, and way too often in fiction. IT IS NOT. Is lazy and is bullshit.

AVOID “I can’t talk about it now”:  In cheap flicks and TV they need drama. And to make drama their characters have to be really flawed. And the inability to reach a consensus through dialog (which is the most common sense way of reaching an agreement) creates great drama. But it is lazy and unrealistic. And bullshit.

Another variation of this is “Why won’t you talk to me?  “It’s complicated.”

AVOID “We have to talk about your/my feelings”:  Usually, real life is not about psychoanalysis with your friends. Usually.

AVOID “You owe me as much”: You want to force a character to disclose information to another, so you resort to this old artifice

AVOID Forensics always misses something at the crime scene

AVOID Irish guys drink and sing old-timey songs: Careful with racial/gender/nationality stereotypes. Germans being all neo-nazis, middle-easterners being all terrorists, French all smoking and smelling bad… I have lost count of how many times I’ve seen action taken place in cities of Spain (like Barcelona or Madrid) and the artist using references of rural Mexico. Also, the Asian math geeks who can’t drive, or the rural white who only has one tooth and married his cousin.

AVOID Children behaving like morons:  Most TV/Hollywood writers not only do not have children, but even the ones that have them, avoid them and leave them with nannies. Thus they constantly use them (often) as a recourse for when they need someone to do something stupid to move the plot along.  I saw a 10 year old girl open the door to a clown in the middle of the night, a child play with matches sin a gas station, a kid provoke a multiple car accident from the back seat… Add in this category the Troubled Teen Daughter/Son

Children usually are freaking smart, (except a noted cases) and very creatives, thinking outside the box. But writers keep using them as artifices for stupidity.

AVOID assuming people are interested the same you are about the same things you are.  Recently I wrote a bad review about a comic called Evil Empire, because the writer (who I later found out was on a band) put too much emphasis on the character who was a singer. And singing and comic books… are a hard match. And he didn’t make them work because he assumed the readers would be into the music part of the comic as much as he was….

 AVOID TV CLICHES: Lets see… the nerd with the tape on glasses, the comic book collector that talks like he has a mouth full of spit and gum, the Chief of medical staff who is a sarcastic asshole, the judge who goes against the protagonist, just to create extra drama, the jock who is a muscle-bound ignoramus,

Now, these tips are things to avoid in order to NOT BE A BAD WRITER.

But in order to be a mildly successfully popular writer, you can’t completely avoid these conventions.

If you want to use them, you have to make them yours. You have to twist them and use them to your advantage. And if you are writing for an audience, always keep them in mind.

 
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